Thanks very much Birdhs for taking the time to comment and share your thoughts.
Since the original post I've continued to work on the painting, nothing major, just a lot of small adjustments. Mainly trying to make more interesting shapes and lightening the background to provide more contrast between figures and ground.
I amazes me how I can put in so much more time and see relatively little change. Still, I think it's an improvement.
Currently working on a set of belated get well cards
Last edited by Don Berendsen : 03-23-2017 at 08:40 PM.
Reason: realized the truth