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February 8, 2018 at 8:07 pm #451012
michaeljarman
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Decided to drag out an old gouache painting and refine and “revive” it … still working on this small painting. C&C welcomed 😊
February 9, 2018 at 4:07 pm #562396
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Refining and revising…
February 9, 2018 at 8:25 pm #562394
ArtistOz
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Nice capture of atmosphere with gouache. I wonder if one of her cheeks should be a little fuller or narrower as they look uneven?

Bill,
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February 10, 2018 at 2:25 am #562395
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It’s lovely. I don’t think it needs more work….but I’m not the creator of this piece. I really like the atmosphere, and her expression makes me wonder what she’s thinking about, making it intreaguing.

The cheeks make perfect sense the way they are, with the slight bit of shadow from the shawl on her left, brighter lit, one. That may cause that cheek not to look as full, but it works.

Critiques and comments are always welcome.
February 10, 2018 at 11:43 am #562397
michaeljarman
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Thank you so much, Bill and Phranque, for bringing some thoughtful comments to consider! I’ll take a close look at the cheeks, Bill 😊.

I need to clarify one thing: I drug out this old gouache painting and revised and revived it with pastel 😊.

Thx Everyone!
February 10, 2018 at 1:53 pm #562398
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Revising….
February 10, 2018 at 3:07 pm #562399
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Value adjustment…
February 10, 2018 at 7:03 pm #562400
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Worked on values…
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