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  • May 6, 2018 at 4:50 am #455672
    Alex Melnicov
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        Good day

        Here is my little drawing, aquarelle pencil on color paper

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        [FONT="Verdana"]Niccolo Paganini

        May 15, 2018 at 10:45 am #618163
        KreativeK Moderator
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            This is beautiful, Alex, what size is it? The light touches of the white flowers are really necessary as the rest is pretty dark.

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            June 4, 2018 at 11:47 am #618164
            Jon
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                Lovely and I think the choice to go with the colored paper was spot on.

                June 27, 2018 at 9:11 am #618166
                Alex Melnicov
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                    This is beautiful, Alex, what size is it? The light touches of the white flowers are really necessary as the rest is pretty dark.

                    Good day, KreativeK

                    Thanks for the feedback. Size is 28,5 * 40 cm

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                    June 27, 2018 at 9:14 am #618167
                    Alex Melnicov
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                        Lovely and I think the choice to go with the colored paper was spot on.

                        Good day, Jon

                        Thanks for feedback.

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                        [FONT="Verdana"]Niccolo Paganini

                        June 29, 2018 at 12:49 am #618165
                        goldensun
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                            I really like this painting but I think it lacks a bit of contrast. the little use of colors with high chroma is ok, but there is an imbalance of light and shadow. Although you have used dark colors in most areas some areas aren’t dark enough. You also should use more light colors in the areas facing the light source.

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                            June 29, 2018 at 8:05 am #618168
                            Alex Melnicov
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                                I really like this painting but I think it lacks a bit of contrast. the little use of colors with high chroma is ok, but there is an imbalance of light and shadow. Although you have used dark colors in most areas some areas aren’t dark enough. You also should use more light colors in the areas facing the light source.

                                Good day, goldensun

                                Thanks, and for the advices too

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                                [FONT="Verdana"]Niccolo Paganini

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