Such a direct approach, could be very useful as a study. I am noctoriously bad at doing studies like these personally, and would probably benefit greatly from the experience. Good work, captures colors and reflection and impression of light well. The drawing aspect could be tightened up at any point later, the impression is a success.

Your brush moves are great….some can’t get that right. I like it.

Nice work – I think in art everything is correct:)!