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Didn't get all my home work done! Think I picked to many buildings too much details. Here is what I have done so far. I want to put the people in but no details.

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If you have time Jo, could you please cast your eyes on my Picture of Whitby Harbour...Whitby, famous tourist destination on the North Yorkshire Coast, England...in case you were wondering!
I did it a few years ago, but I have toned it down a bit since I began your classes!
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I hope that it is okay to post a old class painting here. I tried to get my photo of my painting to where you can see it, Jo. Thanks for your patience with me as this is my third try at posting this one. This is the third painting of my life. It is Pan Pastel with a little bit of pastel pencils trying to get close to your watercolor painting. Done on 12X16 Canson blue color. Hopefully the third time is the charm as I would like to move on and do something different. Good class today. Frances
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If you have time Jo, could you please cast your eyes on my Picture of Whitby Harbour...Whitby, famous tourist destination on the North Yorkshire Coast, England...in case you were wondering!
I did it a few years ago, but I have toned it down a bit since I began your classes!
Be glad to Dee but would rather do it in class. It is easier to say more that way. Besides I would like to use photoshop and do some things to it.
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I hope that it is okay to post a old class painting here. I tried to get my photo of my painting to where you can see it, Jo. Thanks for your patience with me as this is my third try at posting this one. This is the third painting of my life. It is Pan Pastel with a little bit of pastel pencils trying to get close to your watercolor painting. Done on 12X16 Canson blue color. Hopefully the third time is the charm as I would like to move on and do something different. Good class today. Frances
This painting would benefit if you glazed the bushes and middle ground area with yellow. You have saturated trees and then everything else grayed down. I would pump up the chroma in other places. Don't glaze over your bright trees though.
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Thanks Jo. The funny thing is I did that on purpose thinking it had to be lighter there. LOL I worked hard at it too! That's what happens to a "green person" I guess. I will fix it and repost it later. Frances
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