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        My goal was to get this a bit brighter than my last cloudy landscape (autumn clouds over shellcamp), not sure how I did on the brightness without a learning curve thrown in there, but I feel like it’s at least a step in the right direction :p 16×20″ on canvas

        As always comments and critiques are very much apprectiated! Thanks for looking

        Paul Moreau
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        #752981
        AWC123
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            Nice trees. I tried a landscape background a while back and became very frustrated with the tree tops on the horizon. You should be pleased yours look good.

            #752980
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                This has great texture and the red tree is a nice compliment to the greens.
                Well done.

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                You have a lot of nice things happening in this painting. The overall texture is very nice and I like that red tree.

                You say you want to go brighter- your lighter values are a good place for that. You already have a good handle on value, so maybe just try for higher chroma in your middle and lighter value areas. Don’t over-use white or black, those both knock down chroma.

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                #752984
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                    AWC124, objctv, stapeliad thank you!

                    What you said is super helpful, stapeliad, I was kinda scratching my head lol. Noted for the future!

                    Paul Moreau
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                        I think this speaks of what you wanted. Cloudy Autumn, Perhaps even rain. I like that mood.
                        The Overall texture really unifies the painting.
                        NICE Paul.

                        #752979
                        Hamburgefions
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                            Very nice painting!
                            Especially the water.

                            #752983
                            asdo
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                                WOW! Great texture, sense of depth, color, mood. Love the overcast look.

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                                #752978
                                midwest
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                                    Beautiful united texture and compo. If you wanted you could probably brighten up the light areas a step

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                                    Boafamily
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                                        So many beautiful textures and the colors are wonderful.

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