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Old 11-15-2014, 05:59 PM
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Jo, with broken ribs, I had to work on this painting. I've included the before and the after is obvious. The before has the colors right, the after is a bit off, too cold to take it outside to take the pic so they would be photographed under same lighting conditions. All helpful comments will be taken to heart, as this is one of only a handful of landscapes I've ever painted. I'm thinking I need something on the left side, but jury is still out. ( I have tweaked it some since I posted it. corrected the 'horizon line at base of mtn, added some other detail in the middle ground foliage as examples) Trying my hand at improving the photo that you commented on in "Painting from Photos" class.
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Old 11-20-2014, 05:14 PM
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Summer in Provence by Claire Vogt Wally Vogt Designs
Oil on Canvas 16 x 20

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Summer in Provence by Claire Vogt Wally Vogt Designs
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Nice, soft very painterly. try to find ways to organize things in a subtle manner to create a visual movement from the foreground and lead the viewer into the depth of your painting.
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Hi Jo

Here's my latest pastel on Colorfix titled "Autumn Dream". I wanted to convey a dreamy mood from a foggy autumn scene. I was struggling a bit with the upper left of the overhang branches.. What do you think?

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Here's my latest pastel on Colorfix titled "Autumn Dream". I wanted to convey a dreamy mood from a foggy autumn scene. I was struggling a bit with the upper left of the overhang branches.. What do you think?

Susan
A painting can be too cool or too warm. Fortunately you added the cooler violets in the distance to give relief to the strong warm orange.
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