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Hi all !
I would appreciate any help you can offer
MY IMAGE(S):
GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: train girl
Year Created:
Medium: Digital
Surface: Other
Dimension: 24*32
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!MY COMMENTS:
this is a digital attempt to choose a composition. I have already started the version 1, still yet unsure. some details are missing yet this is the general ideaMY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I’ld like to hear comments on both compositionsMaria
My Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/horseandmoon/?hl=enLovely image. Is there a reason you chose the landscape orientation?
A portrait orientation would draw the eye into the image and remove the flat space to the right.
Kim
c&c is always welcome
http://KBEdwards.cominteresting cropping !!! Thank you Kim .
Lovely image. Is there a reason you chose the landscape orientation?
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I haven’t a clear answer to that. The intention was to enhance the feeling of being a stranger in a strange land. Somehow, I needed that big window yet not very sure about it
Maria
My Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/horseandmoon/?hl=enI see your point and appreciate your feedback
this is what I have done so far following version 1, yet cropped according to your suggestions
Maria
My Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/horseandmoon/?hl=enPerhaps you can try the version two with the empty seat next to her. To me it says “it is just me, all by myself”. So, I like the other crop. But may be it is just me.
C&C always welcome
[IMG]https://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-24-2019/1976779_tg4c.jpg[/IMG]
I’m not an expert in composition/design, though I really think the window & empty seat & flat wall under the window should stay.
I don’t think she’s alone. Usually children will always take the window seat, and yet here she saves the window seat for possibly a spirit with her?
Sunlight “looking over” her shoulder? When the focus/subject changes from the girl to the window & empty seat, there’s something (almost scary) about it.
The line of the inner train … an inner world … different/same “train” of existence or existence landscape … also called “planes” of existence. It’s beautiful masterful!
Elle AmdeElle Amde
Never fear; always persevere.
Perhaps you can try the version two with the empty seat next to her. To me it says “it is just me, all by myself”. So, I like the other crop. But may be it is just me.
Thank you Shenko and sorry for the late reply. She looked so content indeed and I’m trying to depict that .
Maria
My Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/horseandmoon/?hl=enI’m not an expert in composition/design, though I really think the window & empty seat & flat wall under the window should stay.
I don’t think she’s alone. Usually children will always take the window seat, and yet here she saves the window seat for possibly a spirit with her?
Sunlight “looking over” her shoulder? When the focus/subject changes from the girl to the window & empty seat, there’s something (almost scary) about it.
The line of the inner train … an inner world … different/same “train” of existence or existence landscape … also called “planes” of existence. It’s beautiful masterful! Elle AmdeI’m keeping then at least for that version. A friend of mine asked for the cropped version so I’m playing with the one I started for the time being..
Yes !! I try to paint her inner world. I liked what you said about the empty seat. Maybe it’s for her friendly spirit, maybe she saves it for us to travel with her in her inner spaces
Thank you for the lovely thoughts you shared ❤️
Maria
My Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/horseandmoon/?hl=en
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