I think it would be nice to have a broken trail of light coming from the base of the trees on the left and cutting diagonally across to the right and then finding its way to the pool on the bottom. It is sort of there already, which gave me the idea.

I think this is coming along beautifully Caroline, I agree that the colours are superb in this piece and that contrast with the introduction of the water is brilliant giving added depth and dimension.
John

Yeah, I wouldn’t do much else to this one, myself. It is so rich and harmonious as is. Really very lovely painting.

Caroline – Great value control & lovely harmony. The water reflections work well as they are subtle yet do not compete with the main tree. Another important, subtle inclusion is that hint of distant blue which adds depth & complements the main color scheme.

If the bright shrub is considered an issue, perhaps the application of warm, dark glaze may reduce its importance ? – A great result & I agree it does have that 19th century look.

Michael

Very nice! The textures are great and your values are deep enough to support any light of evening. I would suggest some small edge work and flattening on the water for it’s read-

This is stunning Caroline! I love the colors and the subtle hints of light – a real gem!

Wonderfully suggestive — bravo indeed !!!!!