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Old 01-08-2004, 07:21 PM
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"My Mom's Mums" (What is wrong with composition?)

Hello everybody!
Happy New Year and my best wishes!
Here is my not finished piece in colored pencils 22x10. I am not happy with results at this point and I want re-do whole thing.
Although I still like a general idea of this composition I want to know what doesn’t work and need changes. I took few pictures of white mums on the shawl and after some cropping and pasting in PhotoShop I have reference “combo”.
Should flowers look up? What is about position of folds?
I appreciate all opinions and suggestions.
Thank you very much in advance!
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Old 01-09-2004, 01:43 PM
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Re: "My Mom's Mums" (What is wrong with composition?)

honestly alyona, i'm at a loss here...maybe some of the better minds like jackie and henrik will come up with something.

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