"My Mom's Mums" (What is wrong with composition?)
Happy New Year and my best wishes!
Here is my not finished piece in colored pencils 22x10. I am not happy with results at this point and I want re-do whole thing.
Although I still like a general idea of this composition I want to know what doesn’t work and need changes. I took few pictures of white mums on the shawl and after some cropping and pasting in PhotoShop I have reference “combo”.
Should flowers look up? What is about position of folds?
I appreciate all opinions and suggestions.
Thank you very much in advance!