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Old 04-29-2012, 08:59 AM
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Here is the still life I did yesterday.....


Copper Jug n Pomegranate
(Alla Prima Still Life from life)
24inchs X 30 inchs
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Re: Copper jug and Pomegranate (Alla Prima still life)

Tirtha,

I thought I had commented on this painting this morning, but my comments aren't showing up, so I shall try again.

I love the composition and the color palette. The pitcher is magnificent! Great color and reflections.

I do have a suggestion if you'd like it, but I didn't want to post that unless you want it.

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Re: Copper jug and Pomegranate (Alla Prima still life)

Carol, thank you very much. I would like to improve on my works and any suggestion is welcome
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I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. My suggestion is to glaze over the back corner so that the orange is not quite as bright. It sort of overpowers the lovely coppeR jug. Also, you have a great start on the fabric folds. Each fold/drape of fabric has three or four values. So if you can bring out those values, you'll have a super piece.

Very nice job!

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Re: Copper jug and Pomegranate (Alla Prima still life)

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I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. My suggestion is to glaze over the back corner so that the orange is not quite as bright. It sort of overpowers the lovely coppeR jug. Also, you have a great start on the fabric folds. Each fold/drape of fabric has three or four values. So if you can bring out those values, you'll have a super piece.

Very nice job!

Carol
I agree with Carol....And I like your copper Jug/pitcher very much indeed!
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Thank you very much Deirdre....I will definitely keep that in mind
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Re: Copper jug and Pomegranate (Alla Prima still life)

Tirtha, your work is lovely.
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Thank you so much Eileen
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