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  • September 12, 2018 at 3:10 am #461832
    jmomalley
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        GENERAL INFORMATION:
        Title: Offering
        Year Created: 2018
        Medium: watercolor
        Surface: paper
        Dimension: 18×24
        Allow digital alterations?: Yes

        MY COMMENTS:
        I am trying to learn to paint.
        I had a hard time adjusting the photo so that you can see the contrast in the face area.

        MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
        Is it any good?

        September 12, 2018 at 12:18 pm #692681
        La_
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            ‘good’ is subjective and not everyone likes ‘creepy’ … i like creepy so for me it’s good.
            I like the mix of colors you’ve chosen and enjoy that even with the brightness of her white face, i wasn’t drawn first to her, she snuck in second after the ‘roof’.
            When you frame it i hope you’re able to keep the majority of the strip of white at the top.

            la

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            September 12, 2018 at 5:56 pm #692682
            jmomalley
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                Thank you for your feedback. I hadn’t considered keeping the white border in, but will now.

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