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Old 09-12-2018, 04:10 AM
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GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Offering
Year Created: 2018
Medium: watercolor
Surface: paper
Dimension: 18x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes

MY COMMENTS:
I am trying to learn to paint.
I had a hard time adjusting the photo so that you can see the contrast in the face area.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Is it any good?
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Old 09-12-2018, 01:18 PM
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Re: Offering

'good' is subjective and not everyone likes 'creepy' ... i like creepy so for me it's good.
I like the mix of colors you've chosen and enjoy that even with the brightness of her white face, i wasn't drawn first to her, she snuck in second after the 'roof'.
When you frame it i hope you're able to keep the majority of the strip of white at the top.

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Old 09-12-2018, 06:56 PM
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Re: Offering

Thank you for your feedback. I hadn't considered keeping the white border in, but will now.
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