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Old 10-03-2017, 04:22 PM
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Landscape 2

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Title: Landscape 2
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Medium: Acrylic
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Dimension: 16 x 20 inch
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A landscape

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Your critique please.
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Old 10-03-2017, 04:34 PM
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Re: Landscape 2

Semi abstract? Dusk ? or what time of day/night?
If evening the sky almost has plenty of room for a soft moon or tiny stars.
It could be some glare or texture , but kind of looks like stars in places. or shooting stars.. The moon would have to be in the upper left for the tree shadow to match up..
If it is a dusk scene the green grass could be darker..
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Old 10-03-2017, 06:23 PM
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Re: Landscape 2

Thanks a lot.
It was meant to be a stormy sky, but obviously didn't happen. Is there anything good at all in it? I value your advise.
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Old 10-04-2017, 05:23 PM
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Re: Landscape 2

What I see is a composition that leads the viewer right out of the right side of the picture. Every line heads out the right side at the same spot. There needs to be something that stops that. My 2 cents worth.
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Old 10-04-2017, 11:16 PM
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Re: Landscape 2

Thanks a lot. I appreciate it.
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