HavingBeenThereAndComingBack

[PiKoonMo]

a current wip. as is , 52 x 72 inches. I like a lot of what is going on. The gestures are free and move the eye around. I do not like the "peace sign" ish thing going on in the upper right. it will soon be gone. This piece will most likely be the center of a triptych. all crit & comments welcome.

[Gwenever]

I think its beautiful. Id love to see all three together.

[spicuzza]

The palette is lovely altho to me theres a bit of an overreliance on orange; a touch of a pale minty green will help. It can be a wonderful work on its own, without the need for a tryptich. I'd simplify the work and give it more white space to let it breathe.

[Frances Obie]

I like what I see so far, although I agree with you about the peace sign. Personally I like the orange tones and I hope you keep the white areas. Lots of action in this. Looking forward to the next stage!

[jumper]

Nice, nice work. I like what you did with the white and black lines.

[timE]

Very inspired and spirited imagery in this one. I hope you post the finish.

[Katie Black]

Hi, I like this a lot!...the colours,movement, everything all work together very nicely.

[firebrush]

I love the freedom of your gestures.

[Sean T.]

I love the colors too.