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Old 05-05-2012, 09:46 PM
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Lily Blooms -Structured



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Lily Blooms -Structured
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Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I was working on light and shadows.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I'd like feedback on anything at all that you might notice that needs fixing. Thanks.
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Re: Lily Blooms -Structured

updated photo:

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Re: Lily Blooms -Structured

I didn't like the last one, so here's the new:

Is it better??
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Re: Lily Blooms -Structured

yes, it is better. It is no longer a decaled flower on black and it also clearly states that you are going for vibrant colors as opposed to something 100% realistic.

Maybe some minor tweaking - now it is somewhat separated diagonally (upper right vibrant green, lower left blue).
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