Hi Rob, Thanks for the great feed back, balancing landscapes is very difficult, I think I started to dark with the near distance and then as you say left the mid and foreground to light.
Apparently nudity is not obligatory even for the campers, most where wrapped up, just two working in the gardens as nature intended
The man is interested in doing some life modelling. He should have a good tan by September
“What peaches and what penumbras! Whole families shopping at night! Aisles full of husbands! Wives in the avocados, babies in the tomatoes!—and you, Garcia Lorca, what were you doing down by the watermelons?”
— Allen Ginsberg
Are you ready for a Journey
PS Critiques always welcome but no plaudits please.