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Originally Posted by VeronicaF
Hi Guys, This is my first painting in ages
Thanks for looking everyone

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Veronica, this is very nice! It has been a while since you've been around! This is very soft looking. You didn't ask for a critique, so I hope I don't offend you. Just a suggestion....
Just some "kissing" edgesI noticed. I've circled them. I hope you don't mind. I certainly wouldn't expect you to do this over, but just for future reference.

I think if you could move some of these objects just a bit forward or back, it would give your painting much more depth. I'm no expert, of course, but it's one of the things I look for when I'm laying out my painting, and as I'm painting. Your work always has such a unique quality to it. I could recognize your style anywhere! Just my two cents worth.
