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Old 04-25-2012, 01:44 PM
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Hello, all! This is my latest painting done on a 20 x 25 in. canvas. For this painting I used raw umber, yellow ochre, burnt sienna, venetian red, genuine vermilion, genuine naples yellow light, viridian, ultramarine violet, ultramarine blue, and cremnitz white.

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Old 04-26-2012, 05:49 PM
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Jose....I bet you had fun arranging this one! Works very well...the plane looks as if it's about to take off!
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I like it however I think to me it is centered too much and the hard line of the wall/ground attracts my eye too much.
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Old 04-27-2012, 02:06 PM
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Thank you, Deirdre!

Thank you, Carol, for your kind observations. I´m thinking of doing some few touches here and there to improve the painting..including softening that foreground/background line a bit more. I might have to restretch the canvas on a smaller canvas to fix the composition and have the globe a little bit more to the side.
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