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Old 04-10-2012, 06:44 PM
Edradour Edradour is offline
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Girl in Yellow WiP: move to Structured Critique please

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GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Girl in Yellow: move to Structured Critique please
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 36 x 48
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Work in Progress
This is an abstract land/sea scape with back references to a well known piece, though I think I've made it my own - the title subject is certainly different.

The figure is loosely based on a life study I did years ago.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I'm not happy with the figure/pose, I possibly need to move the right foot closer to her center of weight, and maybe lift her left foot

I'd also like to know if the general composition works


Note: shadow at top center is from my easle - not part of the painting
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