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Old 04-10-2012, 05:44 PM
Edradour Edradour is offline
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Girl in Yellow WiP: move to Structured Critique please


Title: Girl in Yellow: move to Structured Critique please
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Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 36 x 48
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

Work in Progress
This is an abstract land/sea scape with back references to a well known piece, though I think I've made it my own - the title subject is certainly different.

The figure is loosely based on a life study I did years ago.

I'm not happy with the figure/pose, I possibly need to move the right foot closer to her center of weight, and maybe lift her left foot

I'd also like to know if the general composition works

Note: shadow at top center is from my easle - not part of the painting
Robert A Stuart
My Website: rstuart.com

Last edited by Edradour : 04-10-2012 at 05:54 PM.
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