Girl in Yellow WiP: move to Structured Critique please

[Edradour]

MY IMAGE(S):



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Girl in Yellow: move to Structured Critique please
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 36 x 48
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Work in Progress
This is an abstract land/sea scape with back references to a well known piece, though I think I've made it my own - the title subject is certainly different.

The figure is loosely based on a life study I did years ago.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I'm not happy with the figure/pose, I possibly need to move the right foot closer to her center of weight, and maybe lift her left foot

I'd also like to know if the general composition works


Note: shadow at top center is from my easle - not part of the painting

[Edradour]

Well, I've scraped her off. Next, I'll see if I can save the picture, or re-use the canvas

Thanks for looking

[Edradour]

Did I close down comment?
Revised version here: http://www.wetcanvas.com/forums/show...readid=1091572 Untitled