Title: Girl in Yellow: move to Structured Critique please
Dimension: 36 x 48
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!
Work in Progress
This is an abstract land/sea scape with back references to a well known piece, though I think I've made it my own - the title subject is certainly different.
The figure is loosely based on a life study I did years ago.
MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I'm not happy with the figure/pose, I possibly need to move the right foot closer to her center of weight, and maybe lift her left foot
I'd also like to know if the general composition works
: shadow at top center is from my easle - not part of the painting