Re: Portrait - Structured Sritique pls.
you can fix things until the paint gets tacky or until the colors turn muddy, then you have to wait until it's dry to do any more.
nicely done i think, only a couple of issues ... her right arm, should the arm be darker within the sleeve? and the wood on the arm of the chair (bottom left corner) wonderful detailing there, but it seems to be the darkest, strongest edged item in the whole painting and it draws they eyes down to it so i'd soften it.
also, her upper lip seems quite a bit thicker than the bottom one ... this may be, in which case it just is what it is, but 'normally' they are more equal or the bottom lip is bigger so just check that.
a mod will move this to structured for you. good to put that request in the title like you have.
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