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Originally Posted by SparrowHawk7
Hi Kathy ... welcome to D&S!
You didn't mention wanting C&C but I'll throw this in for your consideration. Concerning the child on the right - the left side iris isn't quite round - there is a point at about 3 O'Clock and from there to 6 it is slightly flat - and the right side pupil is off center to our left a little. I can see the scan is washed out some - normal with as much white - but I would like to see a bit more value in the rendering of the skin. Other than that, this is an excellent drawing.
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SparrowHawk,
C&C most welcome! You know, I saw this with the little guy's eyes, tried to correct it and messed it up worse than it was - so I put it back the way it began. It was a commission and I was under the gun to get it done, so I just fixed it as best as I could and let it go. Live and learn is what I believe. I showed it to my client, pointed out the 'flaws' I saw and gave her the opportunity to back out. She would have none of it, she was delighted with it. What did I learn from it? Measure, measure, measure!!! This is only the second drawing of children I have ever done, so I was happy with it for the most part.
Thanks for your honest comments!
Kathy
Thank you so much!
For some reason, my computer screen is not picking up some of the details but from what I can see, it is a very nice drawing...very nice on the little girls ears and her eyes too!
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