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Old 08-26-2008, 02:52 PM
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Re: Seascape (for want of a better title)

"Structured Critiques" is sometimes a little frustrating for posters as it has less traffic than open critiques, so, at times, you don't get feedback. And there seems to be a steady problem that folks try to post there and get bounced to open critiques. This is some issue with our site that I don't understand and I don't think has ever been explained by one of our administrators but anyhow, you're here now.

How about calling it "Tide Pool?"

I think it's a solid painting and have only one critical suggestion. Gulls don't flock in long drawn out progression although a bunch will gather around a food source. So I'm bothered that you've drawn tiny ones trailing off into the distance. I'd overpaint the little guys and just show a few of the closer ones.
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