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Old 10-26-2017, 02:14 PM
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Re: Pls move to structured critique. Campbell Valley.

Yes, I think breaking up the line between white and blue is a good idea.
The yellow mound on right seems to have a hard edge also. Maybe add some more tones to it?
Then there is the white line on the road... Is that the edge of the road and that is a pullout? That sharp curve at the bottom seems a little too sharp.

But I really like the colors and the tree and the fence.
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