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Old 07-05-2017, 12:25 AM
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Re: Pls move to structured critique. Campbell Valley.

What I notice the most is the horizontal bands of color, sky, clouds, tree line, field, edge of the road..
Maybe some of those could be blended or broken up a bit.. road edge softer and more over grown? blend the sky/clouds a bit? A little peek thru the far tree line or an opening?
I think the tree looks nice..
Maybe the road could be darker so less noticeable, then the bright field will really stand out. Right now the road tends to grab my eye , when I want to see the field & far trees..
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