Thread: Amaryllis
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Old 02-24-2019, 04:39 PM
AllisonR AllisonR is offline
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Re: Amaryllis

The various white items pop, being surrounded by all the rich saturated reds and blues. Very nice. I like the daring angle of the knife pointing right at us, makes the composition interesting.

Fix the drip going down the far right side. And what is the white object next to the flowerpot, a candle? Doesn't read well and is awkward. The fabric folds are overall pleasing, but some of them are too pointy and stiff, the folds should be more smooth, subtle, curving gently, not hard angles - it is fabric, not metal.
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