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Robincat 08-10-2019 07:22 AM

rocks
 
MY IMAGE(S):



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: rocks
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 5x7
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
realism and texture lesson. I think it tu<br>ed out quite nice for the first time working on small boards.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
comments on shading etc is welcome.

Konfuzd 08-13-2019 05:36 PM

Re: rocks
 
The texture and lighting on the rocks is wonderful! Would love to see the background smoothed out a bit as I find it distracts from the lovely focal point.

The brown circle on the bottom right is a bit confusing. It looks blurred and doesn't quite fit in with the level of detail in the surrounding rocks.

sevan 08-15-2019 10:54 PM

Re: rocks
 
The rocks themselves, color and texture is really nice, so is the ground (sand?). Feel like I could reach out and pick one of the rocks up.
I agree with konfuzd as far as improvement. The background is like a mars sandstorm looming over them. Which in its way is kind of fun, but does distract a little.

Leannekaseno 08-18-2019 06:57 AM

Re: rocks
 
Uh.mazing!! Love love love. No issues for me.

harryfisherman 08-19-2019 04:12 AM

Re: rocks
 
I think you did a fine job.



Before I consider a painting "done" I always check my values.





You can see where the surrounding values are competing. When experimenting I cover a touch dry painting with plastic cling wrap. Then paint potential changes right on the plastic so as not to ruin anything. Play with the values until your satisfied. Try deleting the little brown rock on the lower right or just same value different color.

Beemax 08-20-2019 04:47 AM

Re: rocks
 
Good suggestions all round. The rocks look absolutely wonderful but the background is too similar and competes with the foreground. I'm actually not sure what the background represents, assuming it's sky with a hint of ocean. A touch more impressionism and a bit less of the abstract might help.

Nevertheless, great work.

B


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