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paznbaz
11-09-2011, 11:27 PM
my latest 75cm x 50cm canvas, just finishedhttp://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-Nov-2011/979439-wrecked_compressed.jpg

Jayde
11-10-2011, 03:26 AM
Nice work :thumbsup:

roy-p
11-10-2011, 06:56 AM
Wonderful sense of atmosphere (one can almost 'taste' the salt in the air!) and movement in the water. :thumbsup:

gaykir
11-10-2011, 10:08 AM
Very nice work! I only wish there were a bit more contrast between the tones of the boat and the rocks. They sort of blend in together. Wonderful job on those rocks and a super sky!

noodle1
11-10-2011, 12:05 PM
Lovely, sky is wonderful as is the rest, well done!!

Charlie's Mum
11-10-2011, 12:56 PM
It is well painted and I feel sorry for the boat!

I'd have liked to see the prow of the boat break the horizon line instead of 'kissing' it though :D

Dcam
11-10-2011, 01:35 PM
Very nice placement of rocks and boat. Texture is very well rendered.......good one.
I wonder if a broken mast on the boat may show some interest and line direction?
:thumbsup: Derek

paznbaz
11-10-2011, 04:26 PM
Thanks for your comments. I have made some adjustments in sand and the water line andthe rocks, then taken a better photo.http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/10-Nov-2011/979439-wrecked.jpg

Aires
11-12-2011, 03:30 PM
Very nice composition and the painting well done. Is it the way the painting is slanted on your easel or is the back water line tilted a bit downward to the viewer's left? As it appears on my screen it is obviously tilted a bit downward from the right side. If so, it's an easy fix with a ruler to be sure. I'd also like to see the prow of the boat obviously break the horizon line and the cabin just a smidgeon below the horizon line, avoiding a kiss at both spots.
Nice work!:thumbsup:

paznbaz
11-12-2011, 06:14 PM
Hi Aires, no the tilt is just my camera angle. the horizon was measured I just don't take very good photos. I am going to adjust the boat re the skyline, a very good suggestion.
starting new project today, very detailed if I can pull it off.