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Lorraine Paris
10-01-2011, 12:49 PM
Acrylic on 50 x 40 cm canvas. Reference taken from four different photos.

C & C most welcome.
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/01-Oct-2011/176100-Yellow_Roses.jpg

Haptopaint
10-01-2011, 01:27 PM
Lorraine I really like your roses. For me roses are one of the hardest things to paint so I think you rendered them beautifully.

OkeeKat
10-01-2011, 01:42 PM
Fabulous roses!! Great colors.
Might I suggest to darken the background a bit more especially the lower half below the roses..
and lighten the leaves/stems some on the highlights..
makes the flowers and leaves stand out a bit more.
Well done!

Lorraine Paris
10-01-2011, 02:25 PM
Thanks Haptopaint and Kathie for your comments and suggestion.

pastelmimigt
10-01-2011, 10:02 PM
Lovely. You painted the petals nicely and have beautiful highlights.

I'd like to suggest in the future a slightly different crop. Perhaps it would look better to crop to the petals on the right side of the far right rose - as you have done on the left side of the painting (but not as much). I think that would give better balance to the composition.

Michele

WYSIWYG
10-02-2011, 02:06 AM
Gosh they're lovely, they remind me of my Golden Girls floribundas out front. :) I'd agree about adding a touch more dark in the shadows under where the flowers and leaves would be shading the stems. :)

Robwood
10-03-2011, 04:06 PM
Beautiful roses, Lorraine!

Rob

chammi kaiser
10-04-2011, 04:19 AM
The colours are lovely Lorraine and the roses very realistic. Good advice from Kathie. Well done.

Lorraine Paris
10-04-2011, 05:16 PM
Thank you all for your lovely comments and advice.

gaykir
10-04-2011, 06:13 PM
We can all make improvements but the hard work you put into this shows! I rather like it.