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PainterDeb
08-27-2011, 10:19 PM
...or almost finished! I posted this one earlier as a WIP, and I need to have it signed & varnished in a couple of days.

Thanks for all of the earlier feedback. Coralie, thanks especially for suggesting that I add a center of interest! :)

Any final suggestions or feedback appreciated!

roseanbob
08-28-2011, 12:25 AM
really like this..:)

AllisonR
08-28-2011, 06:34 AM
I like your color scheme and that you added the person as a focal point. However, she seems way to big to me. She is off in the distance, but nearly as tall as the lower branches on the tree - but the trees closest to me seem like the lowest branches are very high up. Is it just me?

PainterDeb
08-28-2011, 11:23 AM
roseanbob, Thanks for the compliment!

Allison, Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it! The woman is not on the far horizon, she is getting ready to walk down a hill....you can see the distant trees beyond her on the right and left, but maybe I need to make them a bit more identifiable. I guess I whited out the trees right behind her to make her more in focus. Does that make any difference in your viewpoint? Thanks again! :)

Does anyone else see the woman as too large?