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FarmGirl29
03-14-2011, 05:28 PM
Hello Everyone!
I need your guys opinion on this one. This is my first time painting a close up of a horse. I was kind of stuck on what to use for a background so I chose my amish neighbors horse pasture. At any rate, I'm having a hard time deciding on wether to lighten up the blue in the sky or not. Also, I was contemplating putting in a two strand barbwire fence with maybe one weathered wooden post around the chest level(in that open space). But, I'm kinda scared of messing things up. I don't have a lot of time to paint and even less to fix mistakes. So if you guys could give me your opinions I'd greatly appreciate it!
Thanks
Sarah
Ps. I must have wiggled when I took this photo its a little blurred. I apalogize.
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/14-Mar-2011/800902-Arabian_spirit.JPG

banananna20032003
03-14-2011, 06:18 PM
Hi Sarah, I would tend not to add the post. The reason? The more things you put in your portrait, the more it takes away from the horse. I think the background you have chosen looks very good the way it is. The blue of the sky also looks fine. Leave alone.........looks great.

Marie

Use Her Name
03-14-2011, 07:58 PM
The brightness of the sky adds dynamism to the horse. A lighter sky might as well be white paper. I would not put the barbed wire/fence post or anything else in the picture right now. I'd say it is pretty much done.

PatrickHedges
03-14-2011, 08:00 PM
I'm with Marie too. When I saw it before reading, I thought what a nice portrait it was!!

FarmGirl29
03-14-2011, 09:14 PM
Okay, thank you guys. I guess I thought the sky stuck out too much. But, I can see what your saying. I definatley think that post would be too much.
Well, thank you all. I'll just work on finishing my horse. Yeah.. almost done!

WSV
03-14-2011, 09:21 PM
Beautiful painting,beautiful horse, your background reads well. I love it! I would sign it and smile! Have a great day. Pat

Lisa M
03-14-2011, 10:11 PM
I ditto the above. And--with horses you have to watch out for the unintended message or impression: No Arabian would be caught dead behind a barbed-wire fence! I jest, in part, but actually, barbless wire is more common for horses since they scratch and cut themselves on barbed wire. Western themes can have it, but not just any piece with a horse.

As others have pointed out, the horse is beautiful; let him have the spotlight. ;)

nickib
03-14-2011, 11:01 PM
Everyone answered your questions perfectly, I think :) ,I would just like to say, I love the horse, especially the nostril, cooky but true,just love it:clap: :clap: Nicki

FarmGirl29
03-14-2011, 11:19 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/14-Mar-2011/800902-Arabian_spirit.JPG

So here is my final...Atleast for now:)
Oh yeah before I forget. I got the photo of the horse from the reference photos.

FarmGirl29
03-14-2011, 11:22 PM
Thank you nicki!!
Lisa you are completely right. Around here people just throw their horses in with their cows. But, I don't think everyone would appreciate that. So that is a good point.
Pat, your so sweet, I signed it just for you ;)

Well, when I added this new photo it changed the top one too. Hmmm....

stirling
03-15-2011, 06:45 AM
Nicely finished Sarah,a very pleasing painting.

Best from mike,x.

online art
03-15-2011, 07:59 AM
It worked out real well, correct decision not putting in the fence as this would have created a barrier between the viewer and the horse / painting. You could have lightened the blue of the sky towards the bottom of the painting and had it darken as you went up, just to add more depth. But you can try that out on your next one :)

Iaartist
03-15-2011, 10:32 AM
I also think the background look fine the way it is. Nice job.

anniecanjump
03-15-2011, 01:49 PM
This looks fabulous. I really like your horse. Not an easy subject for me but you got him dead on. Well done.

FarmGirl29
03-15-2011, 08:29 PM
Thank you very much Mike, peggy, Iaartist and Jason.

Your comments mean a lot to me. I have so much to learn yet. I really appreciate you guys taking the time to look at this. Have a great night!
Sarah

tigress
03-15-2011, 08:49 PM
It looks great just the way it is. Besides have you ever heard the expression "Don't fence me in". I say no more.

jody007
03-16-2011, 10:46 AM
I think it is beautiful!
Jody

FarmGirl29
03-16-2011, 08:51 PM
Thank you Tigress and jody. I agree no fences here, she needs her freedom.

wildlifeart89
03-16-2011, 09:39 PM
Wow, what a stunning piece. The muscles in the face are incredible and the bg is great!
Paige:clap::clap: