River Beginning

[jemgold]

River Beginning is a soft pastel 12"x16".
This is on mounted Uart paper

Comments and critiques welcome

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/20-Dec-2010/31263-River_Beginning-web.jpg

[jbercx]

Nice colors, autumn feeling. Only the river is a little to flat. You should create some movement/shadows in it to make the river more interesting.

[Wayne Gaudon]

nice scene: middle and front seem too close in color and intensity.

[Esmeralinda]

I would tone down the bg for depth but the colours and composition are very nice !

[jemgold]

Thanks for all your comments - I will let it sit in my kitchen for a few days so I can see it often before making any changes.