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12-20-2010, 10:35 PM
River Beginning is a soft pastel 12"x16".
This is on mounted Uart paper
Comments and critiques welcome
12-21-2010, 01:00 AM
Nice colors, autumn feeling. Only the river is a little to flat. You should create some movement/shadows in it to make the river more interesting.
12-21-2010, 08:26 AM
nice scene: middle and front seem too close in color and intensity.
12-21-2010, 10:17 AM
I would tone down the bg for depth but the colours and composition are very nice !
12-21-2010, 09:52 PM
Thanks for all your comments - I will let it sit in my kitchen for a few days so I can see it often before making any changes.
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