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karenboss
12-18-2002, 01:27 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-18-2002/4697_Dsc00246.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: untitled (still wet)
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 22x30
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
~90% complete -

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
all input is appreciated.

coffee_girl3000
12-18-2002, 01:52 PM
Thought I'd pop over here and have a look...

Seems the gamboge prob didn't make a difference, your yellows and browns are fine.

The painting has a very smooth look to it, and the water looks great. I would suggest some texture and reflections (to show wetness) on the rocks. Maybe splattering or drybrush would be suitable.

The three dark dots on the bottom left rock are bothering me a bit, I'm not sure what they are meant to be mind you! Maybe you could tone them down so they don't stand out so much.

Otherwise, lovely painting, look forward to the rest (post it in the watercolour forum :))