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Paintonbrush
12-14-2002, 05:26 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-14-2002/4969_boyprogress0001.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-14-2002/4969_boyprogress6.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-14-2002/4969_boyprogress11.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: A Boy and His Dog
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 20x14
Allow digital alterations?: No, please :)

MY COMMENTS:
Are you all out Christmas Shopping?


MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
How much further, do you think, I should go with this?
The hair is not done.

Wayne Gaudon
12-14-2002, 05:50 PM
boy's right leg looks disconnected .. I know it's the angle but for some reason it doesn't sit right with me .. I never even noticed the hair undone .. it doesn't need much as this thing sits ok ..

jerryW
12-14-2002, 06:18 PM
you and wayne get gold stars today.

giniaad
12-14-2002, 06:47 PM
looks like me with my pups...
yummy, sweet...

(you are done
when you are done)
I trust you...

coulter
12-14-2002, 09:35 PM
Glorious! :clap:

Don't touch a thing (maybe some highlights in the hair) The rhythm of the leg and arm and dog is perfect!

Mark

stealth
12-14-2002, 09:39 PM
i think there's to much contrast from the background to the arm and leg,a darker arm and leg should draw less attention to these areas that don't seem to be your focal point,to me the boy's face should be the focal pont and that's where the lightest values should be or strongest color.i hope this help's.your doing a great job, keep it up.

Paintonbrush
12-14-2002, 10:43 PM
Jerry...were clicking on stars too not just red presents?
;-)
Wayne......you made me look
giniad-I knw you would say that.....*grin* thanks
Coulter-I'm kinda with you...a few more hilites on buddy dog and maybe take a better pic
Stealth-I see what you mean....thanks..it does really help

artbabe21
12-15-2002, 12:20 AM
a tender scene...well done...:)
looks like makeen with our dog all day...he likes the dog better than anyone!!

have family here, it's nuts!

Alan Cross
12-15-2002, 03:26 AM
I would not do to much more right now its a tender moment and you don't want to lose that feeling.....
Alan :)