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USA
12-13-2002, 02:46 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-13-2002/8237_Changing.gif


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Changing
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 8 x 10
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Just playing with color.I did this one for my girlfriend. She saw the photo in a book.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any thoughts? Is it too busy? I was going for the dot thing. The tree is too centered, I know.

jerryW
12-13-2002, 08:42 AM
what she found and how you responded is great

Paintonbrush
12-13-2002, 10:24 AM
close up please? the outcome is terrific

Alan Cross
12-13-2002, 11:22 AM
My only nit is the branches are to opposite to each other....staggered might look better.
Alan :)

pampe
12-13-2002, 12:41 PM
excellent color and sense of light

USA
12-14-2002, 08:15 AM
Thanks for the positive feed back. Alan you are right, I should of staggered the branches more. I wish I could give you a better close up Paintonbrush, but I lost the clarity when I tried to enlarge. I am still new at photo shop, and learning every day.
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Alan Cross
12-14-2002, 02:50 PM
Sorry I only gave you my nit....the colors are great and I love all the patterns in the background!
Alan :)

USA
12-14-2002, 05:52 PM
Alan,
I've never had anyone's "nit" before. :D LOL. I assume that is short for "nit picking". Anyway, that's o.k. "nit" all you want, that's how I learn from you all. I want to hear the good and the bad. Wet Canvas has taught me so much. Thanks to all of you. Happy Holidays.
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