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Manukarose
12-12-2002, 12:48 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-11-2002/15418_paige_revised.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Paige (revised)
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: A3
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Hi, please excuse my inexperience, but yesterday was the first time I have posted anything online. So here is a better version of 'Paige', the little girl with the world in her eyes. Enjoy! = Manuka-Rose

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I am just starting out as a Portrait Artist and have much to learn, so please teach me.!!!

Alan Cross
12-12-2002, 02:00 AM
Well so far you are doing very good!
Alan :)

jerryW
12-12-2002, 07:38 AM
the contrast is interesting but I would have preferred that you left paige alone and revised the others.
paige previously worked well with the rectangular space, now the oval separation has been applied and it weakens the piece IMO.
at least we have the electronic record.