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artissimo
12-11-2002, 01:13 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-11-2002/6826_IM000013_sm.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: WIP: Portrait of C
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is my first portrait attempt, and is still a WIP (to do: hair, mouth, b/g etc.)

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
How's it looking so far... Any suggestions are greatly appreciated.

jerryW
12-11-2002, 09:00 AM
nice work so far.
could stand as is
rockin' personality

artbabe21
12-11-2002, 09:41 AM
really great work here...
keep it up to the finish...:)

mattlart
12-11-2002, 10:43 AM
Looking good so far..
I'm enjoying the texture in her hair,..particularly as it falls across her forehead.:)

You might consider some warmer skin tones;..making her face "glow" just a bit. Cheers,-Scott

Paintonbrush
12-11-2002, 10:43 AM
This is working out well. I think you are proud and should be. the face is stellar. the hair maybe needs a bit more shine, but I agree with Jerry. It could stand on its own. :clap:

artissimo
12-12-2002, 11:41 AM
Thanks all for your replies.

She is my 6 year old, and yes, Jerry, she does have a "rockin' personality" :-)

Scott: I agree. I thought the skin tones looked a tad too "plastic".