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Manukarose
12-10-2002, 07:29 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-10-2002/15418_Chef_Roberre.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Chef Roberre
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: A4
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Hi this portrait is done by the subject sending his photo to me via email, he has a very bubbly persona and I tried to capture that in this pic. I have not got the photograph still on file, but it is a good likeness. Haere Mai - Manuka Rose

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
How can I improve?

giniaad
12-10-2002, 08:55 PM
nice simple schetch...works well
only nit for me
is index finger nail...too wide
a bit of finger (cuticle too)
would show on either side of nail...
which you did better on his middle finger
(I know the angle is different...point still stands)
oh, and mustach is a touch uneven under nose...
but, might be that way...

could be the scan...
but...
pupils could be darker
and teeth/ gums could show...but not necessarily...
contrast could be deeper...
what ever the scan is...the work is consistantly done...
a good thing

he's got a nice mug...you did good...