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Lorijo
12-08-2002, 04:02 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-08-2002/7448_mailable_nude.jpg


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-08-2002/7448_nude3mail.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Evening at the Beach revised
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16 x 20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
The cloudy one is the new one. The new one's color is more true to life as well, I took the first picture at night.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Does it look better now?

Wayne Gaudon
12-08-2002, 04:24 PM
they fit better now .. IMO .. :D

Alan Cross
12-08-2002, 04:29 PM
Works for me...
Alan :)

arourapope
12-08-2002, 10:21 PM
why is the guy in the shorts wearing clothes? I think it would work better, and make more sense if he was nekkid too.

Lorijo
12-08-2002, 11:00 PM
Thanks Wayne and Alan! He is wearing clothes because its time to go home and she doesn't want to yet so she isn't getting dressed!:rolleyes: Or else she is a mermaid who washed up and since she is on land she lost her tail. He is a beachcomer who just happened along and is wondering what to do with a pouting tailess mermaid. Nekkid yet too!:confused: Really, its probably that I like men in short blue-jeans shorts!:evil: I hate those long baggy shorts men wear now, I wish that fad would die! :) Lorijo

arourapope
12-08-2002, 11:32 PM
blue jean shorts do look nice, don't they? Excuse me, I'm just bad. ;)

Carrie
12-10-2002, 12:43 AM
If you're bad, so am I. Who ever thought the refrigerator repairman and the plumbers were making a fashion statement.!? (I probably shouldn't have made that crack):D :D :evil:

Carrie

Lorijo
12-10-2002, 12:58 PM
There's nothing nicer than seeing a plumber when your pipes have flooded the basement! Lorijo:D

artbabe21
12-10-2002, 10:11 PM
yep, a nekkid mermaid....nice...:)

HSargent
12-11-2002, 12:32 AM
I think I would change the name to suggest your explaination of why she is still nude.

Such as ...

Not ready for the moment to pass!

Otherwise it seems inconsistent.

Lorijo
12-11-2002, 12:54 AM
Thanks Cathleen. Thats a good idea Harry, I will probably change the name. Lorijo:)

Koert
12-11-2002, 11:11 AM
i don't like the one with the dark bg
but the first one is great

Lorijo
12-11-2002, 11:46 AM
Thanks Koert, I like it better too. Lorijo