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Gavinart
12-03-2002, 11:20 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-03-2002/3788_REDPANTS.JPG


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-03-2002/3788_REDPANTSDETAIL.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Red Pants
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: bigger than your average dog
Allow digital alterations?: No, please :)

MY COMMENTS:
Red pants.

This is close to being done. I have to fix his beard and shoulder, as well as some other issues. I had to walk away from this for a day or two, and so I post to see what you all think.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What are your thoughts?

jerryW
12-03-2002, 03:30 PM
the upright and reclined aspect of two figures can be indulged in with great pleasure here.
artfully mixed color applied with care to enhance the 2-dimensional layout makes the figures and the figures make 3-dimensional space come alive, and the space is comforting and inviting.

solipsist1
12-03-2002, 06:37 PM
The composition and the colors are fantastic. Nice work!:D

MikeN
12-03-2002, 06:47 PM
Hello Gavinart,

Nice painting. Its got a real nice feel to it. IMO the red is too bright and distrating. Have you tried a lesser intensity, something less powerful? Maybe less of the pants showing could be another option. Just my opinion.

BTW, excellent work on your site.

mike

TeAnne
12-04-2002, 02:47 AM
What an incrediable work. Love the colours and the texture. I love the reds in the face.

Allan Jameson
12-04-2002, 04:30 PM
Very alive ......maybe a little intense.....but I like it.