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ecobb
10-24-2010, 10:01 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/24-Oct-2010/91975-Broadcast_Peak.jpg
12x16 Acrylic on panel. C&C most welcome.

purplepansey
10-25-2010, 10:14 AM
I like the scene but maybe a little too much of the folliage hanging down from the top on the left side, what do you think?

OkeeKat
10-25-2010, 11:19 AM
Beautifully done, Love the view from under this big ole tree!
Great depth, though its hard to see the peak!

noodle1
10-25-2010, 12:09 PM
I like looking through the foliage in the foreground and I like the color shift of the background. Very nicely done, wonderful peaceful feel to this one.

Elaine

vmrs
10-25-2010, 12:43 PM
Nicely done!

Nayana
10-25-2010, 03:50 PM
I think the sponge-like technique on the branches/leaves in the foreground is very distracting with the background. It almost feels like you took another finished painting and put that all on top. I'm sorry but it ruined it for me.

ecobb
10-26-2010, 05:20 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/26-Oct-2010/91975-Broadcast_Peak_02.jpg
I'm listening - Thanks for the help.

ecobb
11-03-2010, 12:37 PM
I've been playing with it. Still have some touching up to do but i think it is looking a little better.
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/03-Nov-2010/91975-Broadcast_Peak.jpg

LoubyLou
11-03-2010, 01:40 PM
What a difference!! So much colour and light. Definitely much improved imho! Maybe the peak needs to be softened a little... it's got quite an edge to it colourwise on the last image posting, I personally preferred the peak as it was on the image previous to this one... I think it's just a personal preference thing though! :)

Louise

tonyjazz
11-04-2010, 09:53 PM
What intense changes! You final art looks great. Sign it...........TJ