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jazzm
04-10-2000, 03:13 PM
for anyone wondering where the phantom "craftsman" is at, here is the page I don't know how to post the image directly so pardon my ignorance...Jazzm (craftsman.jpg)http://www.artistnation.com/members/paris/jazz/images/craftsman.jpg
ps if anyone would be so kind as to educate me I would be eternally greatful...Jazzm

frank
04-10-2000, 06:25 PM
This page takes you through it step by step. http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/index.html
Frank

jazzm
04-10-2000, 06:38 PM
I think I have it this time!
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/User/The_craftsman1.jpg


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jazzm
04-10-2000, 06:50 PM
Thanks a million Henrik...it is a little confusing!

jazzm
04-10-2000, 06:52 PM
Thank you also Frank....Jazzm

oleCC
04-10-2000, 07:06 PM
hey Jazz....see? Knew you could figure this out ! I have already put my two cents worth in to you on this piece,, anxious to see how others respond here . Again, I like this one best of all I have seen Jazz. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

henrik
04-10-2000, 07:14 PM
Jazzm. congrats - you made it. Now if you place the IMG thing beginning on a new line, your image will be placed to the left instead of hanging from the last position of the first line of text.

(edit it, and just hit return before the '[' before the IMG)

J.Dillon
04-10-2000, 07:22 PM
Nice Work Jazzm. It sure has an honest quality about it. The color on the left hand comes in a bit green on my screen. Is it that way on the original ? JD

jazzm
04-10-2000, 07:45 PM
Thanks for that J.Dillon, yes the original is more yellow than green..Jazzm

pixelscapes
04-13-2000, 12:02 AM
I almost hate to bring it up since I like this pic, but, isn't his ear a little big?...

Technique-wise I really enjoy the way that the edges of the form pick up light from the window... it makes a HUGE difference in what would otherwise be dark and middle tones.

-=- Jen / Pixelscapes

jazzm
04-13-2000, 05:36 PM
I have to answer the ear thing..His ears are big!...Its my father at work in his woodworkshop in Co.Offaly Ireland. thanks again for all the help..Jazz http://www.artistnation.com/members/paris/jazz/