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04-09-2000, 07:52 PM
ACHRILYC OVER PAPER
04-09-2000, 09:26 PM
William..I really like this painting..subtle complementaries..good design..tied together nicely! Did you want critique on this or just comments? I think you will get a lot of positive feedback. Sandy
04-10-2000, 01:13 AM
This is a beautiful piece. Reminds me of the impressionists. I made just a few minor changes to get rid of the absolute straight lines. Your eye will naturally finsh a line for you. I feel that by pulling all the stems off the page, that's where my eye was going and they were competing for my attention.
And I changed the color of the flower that is behind the stems near the opening of the vase
[This message has been edited by arlene (edited April 10, 2000).]
04-10-2000, 07:44 AM
William, Is this your painting? i thought you were a watercolorist? From some things you said in chat, I'm wondering if you want to see our reaction to this pot compared to the landscape? Did you do this in 98?
William, Where is your landscape now? I can't find it?
"What if imagination and art are not, as many of us might think, the frosting on life, but the fountainhead of human experience?" - Rollo May from The Courage to Create
[This message has been edited by cagathoc (edited April 10, 2000).]
04-10-2000, 02:37 PM
William.. I really like this piece...your use of colour is excellent....hope to catch you in the cafe...Jazzm
04-11-2000, 07:45 PM
Tx Sandyartist... it’s really a compliment have good input form an artist like you
Yes Arlene I agree with Your changes. The cut you did on the laid stem is ok…;0)
As far I remember I only sketched the jar, the rest was painted “on the fly”, so composition was on the fly too. It took me about three hours in a row.
Didn’t made nay mix… colours are layered direct from the tubes, layer after layers. I like the textures I can make this way… and acrylics dry so fast that is difficult to me to do twice the same mix.
The little flower…. Ooops … I forgot to paint it before I applied the varnish.
Msue… don call Matisse names…. ;0)
Cagathoc… yes I did this one two years ago on a Saturday afternoon… You are seeing my gallerie of rejections… I dislike this…only posted to feel the input… Yes you are right I prefer mainly the watercolours but sometimes I try Acrylic too. The signature… My complete name is António Augusto dos Reis Caseiro…. But After this Ester y will only use William (a nick I like too much)… a new age will come ;0) The P. D. letters are the initials of Ponta Delgada (the town where I painted it) in 98 yes.
The landscape…yes… I deleted it.
Jazzm… I hope to catch you too… You are Irish right?… so take a jar of coffee and stay awake till 3 AM (10PM – USA) The crowd comes after dinner (their dinner)
[This message has been edited by william (edited April 11, 2000).]
William..I find your use of colour and composition pleasing to the eye...if this is a painting that you are not so pleased with ..then I look forward to postings of your favourites!
04-13-2000, 12:15 AM
nice appealing picture william. I think if you are doing matisse the background would be flatter, more one color.The stem changes are legitimate and I really like the pic. If you were to continue in an impressionist manner then you need to lose some of the edges. leave it alone except for changing the stems.
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