PDA

View Full Version : oil on canvas


Julia
02-10-2000, 05:16 PM
I'll see if I'm successful now in posting the image. Any critique is welcome.The address is: http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/User/room.jpg

[This message has been edited by Julia (edited February 10, 2000).]

[This message has been edited by Julia (edited February 10, 2000).]

[This message has been edited by Julia (edited February 10, 2000).]

robinsn
02-10-2000, 05:58 PM
Hi Julia,

If you put "IMG" surrounded by brackets before your URL and "/IMG" surrounded by brackets after your URL, it will show up in the message like this:

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/User/room.jpg


------------------
-Randy
http://www.artistnation.com/members/paris/randy/

Drew Davis
02-10-2000, 10:46 PM
I like it. The soft approach suits the mood. Nice colors, gentle purple/yellow complement and a bit of green to avoid monotony. An impression, without the choppy little brushstrokes of Impressionism.

Only two suggestions. On the left, there's an unexplained light triangle that you could do away with. (Compare with the bottom edge of Gisela's Rocky River.) And I'm just a bit confused by the lighting on the upper-right-most leaf on the plant. It almost looks like it comes out of the leaf below it, and falls away from the viewer. The far (or right) perhaps should be lighter, at least if I'm reading the shape right.

Julia
02-11-2000, 02:49 PM
Thank you, Drew. This triangle is a mistake of my digital camera. I still can't hadle it pretty well. There's none on the canvas.
As for the light, may be, you're right. I'll try to make it right. Thanks a lot.