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Electra
01-24-2000, 11:18 PM
Ok everyone.. here is my first attempt to post a painting in this forum.

I'm aware of the following issues with this tree -- Not enough light values and the leaves at the bottom of the branches are not supposed to be the same length. They won't, after I finish the grass and put them in. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/wink.gif

I need help with the following things, and anything else you find:

1. The grass doesn't look right, and I don't know why.

2. I can't seem to make sky peeking through the trees in the background without making it look hideous.

Please comment on color, composition, etc.

Thanks in advance!

http://www.artistnation.com/members/lofts/electra/JBWillow.jpg



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Phyllis Rennie
01-26-2000, 09:00 PM
Why don't you try a lighter sky. Or were you attempting a night scene? Also some more variations in the greens.