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Ted Bragg
10-28-1999, 09:36 AM
Just sent a 8 x 10 " digital painting. Borrowed the idea from one of your regular artists, but wanted to illustrate an old vase in my studio. Don't like the shading i gave to the fruit.. any ideas
Thanks
Ted

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scottb
10-28-1999, 07:32 PM
Ted, you forgot to attach your image to your message. You uploaded it, but didn't link it in. Check the main critique page for more info. Here it is, though... ;-)

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/User/A_still_life_red_by_4.jpg

DrFeelgood
11-01-1999, 02:38 AM
I think your picture is good first of all,suggestions you might want to group the pottery and glass object a little off center to the leftperhaps over lap the glass and show the pottery as a slight reflection.A darker background would make your images snap. The high key is very nice also. Maybe employ the apples to lead the eye
into the picture although the knife does pretty well.
I like your picture looking forward to seeing more.
Doc-