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animal
02-18-2001, 07:13 PM
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This is the finished Cougar done on Canson Sketch 9x12 with pencils HB and 2B

animal
02-18-2001, 09:01 PM
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BevL
02-21-2001, 12:04 AM
you're really getting better and better, animal! The eyes really look real!
I can see where you do lean a bit, as was mentioned in another thread. I think if you position your drawing surface more upright, and look at your reference more straigh on, it will help a lot. You are doing well with the detail, too. Keep at it!
Hey, maybe check out Ikea for a reasonably priced table that has a tilting top. I am sure they carried them! Hopefully they still do.

Bev

animal
02-21-2001, 11:33 AM
Originally posted by paintfool:
Hey Animal! Great start on your cougar. I love these guys! i would like to see you take this one back to the drawing table and move the lower jaw more to the right of the page ,rather than the left. This would be in keeping with the perspective of the rest of the piece. More shading on the left ear will define it's position a bit. You've done a marvelous job on the eyes! (must be studying after Dduchene a bit ey? http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif. Work him a bit more and you'll have a frame worthy drawing! You've gotten a lot more detailed than in the past! Keep at it because you've shown a lot of growth. I think the detailed work becomes you!
Cheryl




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I have tried moving the lower jaw over but I am not sure if it is far enough.