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pharkell
07-19-2010, 02:01 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-18-2010/55550_Green_Without_Envy.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: "Green without envy"
Year Created:
Medium: Other
Surface: Other
Dimension: 11 x 60
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
this is a scarf. Free hand solvent based gutta drawing with red jacquard 'steam set' dye on 100% silk. Any and all critique will be much appreciated.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I am look for the marketability of such an item and any suggestions as to needs to improve.

maryinasia
07-19-2010, 08:20 AM
beautiful. I love the stained glass effect. The scarf is a bit hard to see in the photo. I would suggest showing a close-up by photo-shopping or whatever, such as below.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/19-Jul-2010/185672-55550_Green_Without_Envy_copy.jpg

pharkell
07-19-2010, 08:15 PM
Thank you so much for your kind encouragement. I'm new at this and am struggeling with presentation of a piece for best view/analysis for critique.

La_
07-20-2010, 12:46 AM
yup, the 'plumbing' was distracting me greatly

the scarf is lovely and i'm glad you left the flowers minimal and let the vine and leaves be more dominant

la

mkillough
07-20-2010, 07:32 PM
This is beautiful! I love 100% silk scarves! :clap: :clap:

Maryq