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Wayne Gaudon
09-29-2002, 11:13 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-29-2002/5946_wintree.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: It's Coming
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 11 x 14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Just around the corner ..

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
no sure about the wall of twigs .. too tight? IE. need some blues in there?

eli
09-29-2002, 11:48 AM
I think your right. The wall of trees caught my eye before I read your coments. On the other hand I like the colors in the snow and the form of the tree.

jerryW
09-29-2002, 03:38 PM
a fragmentary view of a scene is often best.
here a bit of tilt could have helped (too late now), but at the moment I would point out that the level of the ground and the level of the sky which together reduce the effectiveness of the scene can be fixed easiest by eliminating the sky. growing the twigs up. the blue can be in the snow areas, the sky is not necessary in this painting.

Wayne Gaudon
09-29-2002, 06:53 PM
eli
.. thank you ..

jerryw
.. too cool ... really like it now .. just did the PSP fix cause the granddaughter is over .. 3.7 years and non stop action .. I will fix it like this when she leaves later.

Awesome fix .. thanks tons.

arourapope
09-29-2002, 11:35 PM
awesome fix indeed!

artbabe21
09-30-2002, 12:07 AM
great save, Wayne!!

It's so cool when we can see something another way :)

Wayne Gaudon
09-30-2002, 08:25 AM
.. thank you

kudos to Gerry :D

giniaad
09-30-2002, 12:40 PM
yes, Jerry was right!
and you fixed this
into a true GEM!...